Antar peerat mann bechain hai,
yun khushi meri dhool si hai;
tujh se shikva to kuchh nahin le...
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Antar peerat mann bechain hai,
yun khushi meri dhool si hai;
tujh se shikva to kuchh nahin lekin,
tu bata main ne kya bhool ki hai;
Prati kshan tere tasavvar mein,
tujh ko hi main takta hoon;
tu mujhe lakh bhool jae magar,
main tujhe kaise bhool sakta hoon;
kaisi udaseenta hai mukhre par,
balon mein yeh uljhani kyon hai;
tujh ko bhi mujh se pyar hai varan,
teri aankhon mein yeh nami kyon hai?
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Sootradharji,
Thanks for your comments. At last you have seen my poem posted few months before.
rcsood
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Sood Saahib...!

" tujh se sikwa tao kuch nahi lekin
tu bata maine kya bhool ki hai "
Khoobsoorat Sher....Khuda aap ko is Marz se bachaye...
Shootradhaar
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Dear Rajee,
Thank you for your comments on my poem posted on feb2, 2008.
rcsood
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Sood sahib,
Wonderful lines and deep impact on the reader's mind. Kya kammal ke alfaaz hai---TU MUJHE LAAKH BHOOL JAYE MAGAR MAI TUMHE KAISE BHOOL SAKTA HUN.-----very touchy and very emotional----this is true love. I loved you poem and enjoyed it. regards. Rajee.
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Theek hai Dr priya, bina pyar ke aankhein nam nahin hoti.
Thanks for comments.
rcsood
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Sood Sahib,
tujh ko bhi mujh se pyar hai varan,
teri aankhon mein yeh nami kyon hai?
These lines r Beautiful !
Priya
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Anneshwa,
I am happy to find your comment on my poem posted in February.
Thanks for your visit.
I have seen all the photo album posted by you and liked it.
rcsood
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I'm happy that you've posted it in english.............my first visit in your blog.........nice one.
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Mr Anil,
Thank you very much for appreciating my poems, and i am happy to accept your offer of friendship.
rcsood
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Soodji,
Aaj Namita ki Kavita se aapka peecha karta yahan chala aaya..... to paaya ki apne antarman ki peeda dabaye koi aur bhee hai.....aap itna khoobsoorat likhte hain ki meri gujarish hai ki aur likhe .........dil khush ho gaya aapki sundar kavita pardkar......
Cheers,
Anil
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