Mann pagla aur deewana
Chala hai sajan tujh ko pane
Tum na mile to mere preetam
Mera jeevan hi kiya mane
Teri preet nayanan mein vasi
Taake rah yeh prem piyasi
Man bechain yeh samjhe naahi
Aa jao ise tum ise samjhane
Tan ki maati mann ka tel
Deep banaya jyoti het
Preet ki is mein daari baati
Aoge na ise jalane?
Prem ka deep jala din thore
Deep bujha sab naate tore
Mann yeh kis sang nata jore
Phir aa jao tum deep jalane
Dr Priya,
Thank you for appreciating my poem.
rcsood
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Sood Sahib,
Bilkul sahi kaha hai aap ne. Parmatma ke bina jeevan ke maany hi kya hain. Aap ki kavita main Ishak Haqiqi ka nirala rang hai. Bahut acchi kavita hai.....
Priya
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dear smilejoy
thank you for your encouraging comments on my poem "aoge na deep jalane"
rcsood
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bahut sunder mann ke udgaar, sunder shabdo me piroya hai aapne
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DSampath,
Thanks for your beautiful comment on my poem
rcsood
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I liked the poem.
aise sunder kavita sunte hee deep jalane daude ayenge....
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